MyFDL has a number of new community members, including folks who are writing blog posts for the first time. Let’s look at how to write an effective blog post for their benefit, and as a refresher for more seasoned bloggers among us.
How to Write a Post:
– Begin with the end in mind: what is the point you are trying to convey to your readers? It’s a good practice to scratch out a thesis statement or a nut graph in order to frame your thoughts before beginning the rest of your blog post. If you cannot articulate the point in a single paragraph, it’s likely you need to spend more time on organizing your thoughts. Don’t be afraid to draft a quick outline before starting to compose.
– Who, What, Why, When, Where, How should be answered in the course of your post. Take a recent news story and pick it apart and look for these elements; the most effective articles will cover these points very early in order to engage readers and capture their attention. For bloggers, covering these points assures that you are fully aware of the scope of the story and that you haven’t missed a detail, and that you’re fully satisfying your readers’ curiosity.
Here’s a simple exercise most of us can use: Who made you angry? What were they doing that made you angry? Why were they doing it? When and where did they do it? How did they do it? If you can answer each of these points, make a thesis statement as to why you were angry and then flesh out your rationale for being angry, you likely have a solid, interesting and classic blog post. . . .
– Focusing on informing and educating readers in at least one of four ways can make a really good post:
• Pull together and publish some data which hasn’t been readily available; a number of very good bloggers find older data or information and compare to current data to make a point.
• Point to context in information which may not have been discovered by others, ex. finding correlations in data published by government agencies which haven’t been noticed except by you.
• Provide analysis of an issue or event which is unique and educational. It’s not enough to say you’re angry if we’re all angry; tell us in detail what specific issues or events made you angry, picking apart what’s wrong from what’s right.
• Offer a prescription to resolve a challenge, with realistic evaluation of potential outcomes. When bloggers only offer critique and no solutions, they are easily minimized and ignored as not serious.
A really great blog post finds a way to combine two or more of these approaches, like finding data as-yet unshared and pointing to context, or analyzing a challenge and offering a prescription in the same post.
– Take your time. If you cannot muster three paragraphs on your topic — a thesis statement, some commentary, a closing paragraph — take more time to organize your thoughts before publishing. You may be wasting your time if you cannot muster enough material to make an effective point.
Etiquette and Protocol:
– Cite a source either by naming it or by providing a link to the original source. Attribution is critical to developing and maintaining the trust of readers.
– Avoid CAPS in writing, unless using an acronym, or if the proper name is spelled in caps. Use sparingly as emphasis. Writing in all caps is considered shouting in blogging and forums. Never use caps for anything but acronyms in headlines/titles.
– Spellcheck and grammar are musts; in this day and age when spellcheck and grammar check are readily available across the internet, there’s no excuse for spelling errors and poor grammar. Your efforts will not be taken seriously if you don’t respect yourself and your readers enough to check your work.
– Make your post worth reading. While it might be fine for an email between people who are familiar with each other, a single sentence or a single paragraph is not worth your time or your readers’ time. If you do this too often you will lose readers’ trust and they will simply skip your posts when they see your name. (Posts of this nature also run the risk of being pulled back to drafts by moderation and editorial team members, particularly if there is a pattern of these kinds of posts since they act like spam.)
– New work pushes others’ works out of the Recent Diaries list; be considerate of your fellow community members and do your best to make your work at least as good as that you are pushing off the page.
And finally, MyFDL means better blogging. You as a reader expect better blogging from fellow community members here at MyFDL; keep this in mind as you compose and publish. You are rubbing shoulders with some truly excellent bloggers. Your work should help draw attention to you and them alike for the same reasons — quality blogging.
Resources on writing blog posts:
If you want to learn more about how to write good blog posts, here are a few resources.
How to Write A Blog Article Post (Thims, eHow.com)
The essentials of writing a basic, three-paragraph post — it’s elementary. You learned this in grade school, let’s just revisit this process.
5 Tips to Write Blog Posts (Susan Gunelius, About.com)
Nice how-to with emphasis on writing for your own blog site.
5 Simple Ways to Open Your Blog Post With a Bang (Brian Clark, Copyblogger.com)
Snappy, to-the-point overview.
How to write a blog post people love (Penelope Trunk, PenelopeTrunk.com)
Note her comments regarding “writing short”; this is a 13-graf post, packed with info, but it’s “short” because it’s concise considering the amount of information she’s sharing.
Starting a blog? 12 ideas for blog posts (Paul Bradshaw, Online Journalism Blog)
For more advanced bloggers who are trying to write more frequently and may be dealing with writer’s block.
What makes a blog popular? (Dave Pollard, How to Save the World)
Do you have more resources to suggest? Share them in comments.




37 Comments

I suggest a daily ‘open blog’ for people who’d like to post links to articles/blog posts elsewhere that they think are worth reading, but are not prepared to write a post about, like the Open Threads posted periodically at Daily Kos. This could be an outlet for some of the chit chat that sometimes diverts attention on serious posts here.
Perhaps a special slot on the sidebar could display the daily open blog link.
That’s crossed my mind. The problem I see is that we already have the fine work of Blue Texan at FDL’s front page — Early Morning Swim — with a selection of links which acts like an open thread.
But I’ll kick this idea around with the other daily editors, thanks.
I think the “Watercooler” post is designed to fulfill this particular need. At least to some extent.
Thanks for the tips Rayne, excellent points made.
Yes, as an open thread.
Wonderful, Rayne. Much needed, it seems; I only wish everyone had “learned this in grade school.”
Try to propose solutions. Why I am angry today doesn’t do much since everyone else is also angry today.
Don’t assume you know it all. A good post both answers questions and raises new questions. Put them out and ask for input. If you don’t know more by the time the commenting is over than when you first posted, you haven’t made the most of it.
People tend to go off on tangents in the comments. Pay attention to your comments and re-ask questions if you need to. People tend to be responsive to this.
Your next blog can be in response to your commenters/critics.
Oh, I think we all did if we were in public schools. I remember being taught this in third grade, and I’m sure my kids have both covered this at least once before entering high school (the younger one is still in middle school and will be revisiting this soon).
The big problem for most folks is that our learning experiences weren’t exactly fun or personally meaningful, just dry and boring. Imagine if we’d been taught to do simple 3-graf or 5-graf essays in our English/Composition classes using computers and blogs to do so. It would have been a blast!
Style notes:
1. Please use small blocks of text. If your paragraphs are more than nine lines long, regardless of sentence count or length, readers will skip them.
2. Use a topic sentence for each paragraph.
3. Use simple, not compound sentences; break up complex sentences into multiple sentences.
4. Write from one point of view. Are you addressing your reader, President Obama, Senate Democrats, activists and other bloggers? Make your appeal consistent; readers will come away confused otherwise.
5. Link within FDL generously. Did a blogger in another venue inspire your post? Link to that blogger. Did another MyFDL blogger get you thinking? Link to that post. Is someone else at FDL writing about this topic, and you are providing a counterpoint? Link to them.
Rayne,
I tried to use the bullet edit feature the other day.
It showed up in my draft but when I posted my diary the bullets did not show up in the post.
It could be my computer…
Thanks for the post.
Some more I’d add, although these are really just preferences that appeal to me as a reader:
- Avoid the use of the passive voice. The active voice compels, the passive voice mutters.
- Avoid the present progressive tense where possible – Example “He is playing with words.” Use “He plays with words.” I find that when one eliminates the construct of the verb “to be” with gerunds, the style becomes much more lively and forthright. Also known as E Prime.
I am struggling with the present progressive every day, and am thanking you for engaging me in the reminder.
No, it’s not you, it’s the master template for posts. There are still a few features which are being worked on and slowly wound back into service — bulleted lists is one of them.
The bullets in my post were entered manually using the HTML code for that particular symbol followed by two non-breaking spaces. Tedious but it worked. See this site for a list of the HTML codes.
Who’s not struggling with present progressives? LOL
LOL! The thankings and engagings are noted.
Oooh, Rayne, thanks for that list. Will bookmark! I am really really missing the easy coding that seems to have gone away. I can hardly write a response without using italics and bold and my favorite of all — strike through!(Ooh, I can’t find that on the list! Anybody know?)
And Teddy – Platinum star for pointing out that looooong blocks of text tend to get skipped. I sure skip those things – too hard to read on a screen. Especially a laptop screen.
A slightly off topic tech question. Since the software changed I have problems inserting links with the title on top of them. The link buttons in the editor don’t seem to work. When I write out the HTML code it doesn’t compile. Anybody know what I’m doing wrong?
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Rayne,
Thanks for the writing tips and links. As a newcomer to FDL and blogging, I will read them. I’m sure that I have been in violation of more than a couple of the blogging rules since joining this site. Sorry about that!
I fell like this is a new problem compared to the seminal, but the MyFDL posts almost universally have a sort of “Wall of Text” quality to them that isn’t the fault of the posts themselves.
I can clearly see ample paragraph breaks, and often breaks for stylistic emphasis of a sentiment outside the flow of a paragraph. The problem is that the CSS style set for “div.postContent p” is only 0.6em, meaning it’s about 1/2 the line height of the font used to display the content.
If paragraphs are going to be made easy to read, then that value should be at least 1.0em, and probably closer to 1.2em.
Site design can have just as much impact on readability as content does.
yep. you right.
I’m hoping for a fix at some point in the near future, because it takes all of about 15 seconds to change.
If you’re looking for help with basic HTML, one of my favorite sites is W3Schools.com HTML tutorials. You should be able to find some basic tags under their Styles section.
What’s extra groovy about W3Schools: sandboxes which let you sample and play with HTML and see how it looks before using it in real life.
The caveat here is that only a very limited number of style tags will work in comments, like bold, italic, strike through, embed link, blockquote. Pretty much the same ones we used to have with the old system.
After clicking on Write Post, check to see if you are working in Visual or HTML mode before you begin composing – note the tabs at the upper right hand side of the text editing box in the back end.
If you’re in Visual, you should be able to highlight/select the text to embed a link, click on the Link icon above the text editing window, then enter the URL to be embedded.
If you’re in HTML, you can choose to use the buttons to insert HTML tags, or you can type out the HTML script as desired.
You can check to see how the raw HTML looks by flipping back to Visual mode; you can also preview once you have saved as a draft.
I think you’re a fast learner and you’ll get the hang of this in no time.
Thanks for sharing that. We have a number of tweaks on the to-do list, which you can imagine is pretty long given the scale of the migration. Bear with us as we continue to tweak the formatting.
I went through the trouble of creating a site specific CSS override for my browser that makes a lot of changes to things like that when I’m browsing here.
Is there a place I could send that? It might prove helpful.
See contact info in the About Us page.
thank you Rayne
and thanks for all the input from firedogs
Thanks here as well.
The other day, I wrote a post in HTML, clicked the HTML button, pasted the material, but nothing was translated. The editors were nice enough to rehabilitate my post with a lot of effort, but also informed me that old HTML will not work in the HTML mode.
Is it to be understood that clocking the HTML button really gets you into the XHTML mode?
Seriously Off Topic. Rayne, what happened to your series on alternatives to the Dems and where progressives might go?
I don’t have much more to add to that series at this point.
I may have one more post, been debating about whether to invest the effort.
For the most part, a plurality of folks who post regularly here are not amenable to my observations. They really don’t want to hear the truth about the problems we’re up against, want to believe that a magic wand will appear to produce a sparkle pony if they just clap hard enough over their keyboards.
It comes down to this: do I spend my time beating my head against the wall and elevating my personal frustration and my blood pressure, or do I invest my time doing something productive and which actually has personal psychic and emotional rewards? If you never see another piece in that series, you know which I chose.
Or possibly you are not sole possessor of truth.
The content editing windows recognize HTML 5 (which is increasingly the new standard across the internet).
HTML 5 is more forgiving than XHTML since it can assume some tags are implicitly closed; XHTML demands open and close tags on every and all formatted content. It’s better for folks who are relative n00bs at blogging. While the editing window will demand closed tags on some items, others like paragraph ends are assumed if the user enters two manual returns.
You’re entitled to your own opinion, but not your own facts.
I know what you mean. I am a utopian theorist, that is I have a theory which I believe explains our situation. It boils down to we have been driven crazy by inferiority. If you’ve ever tried to persuade anyone they may have different possibilities, you know how difficult it is to change anyone’s mind, including mine.
That said, I’ve been looking for someone to kick ideas about alternatives around for about twenty years with no takers so far. I’d like to hear your truth. Perhaps you may be interested in mine. I agree the comments sections at FDL is not the place. If you are interested sharing frustrations drop me a line at eekunin at gmail.com I don’t think any correspondence we might have will be too burdensome.
Like too much microsoft programming, the new offered little improvement over preceding work, just another pricetag. But at least they tried to make life backward compatible. Not so HTML I notice. Back to school.
Hi Rayne,
I need to be steered to a site where I can learn to make links and to block quotes to separate them from the body of the post. I got back online about a year or so ago and I don’t know anything about HTML. Is that a programming language I can learn or a page formatting language?? If you can recommend a site where I can pick up the skills I would need to have, I would appreciate it.
I tried contacting you at rayne.seminalfdl at gmail.com by email.(10.30.10) Write if you can reply. Thanks.